**bubble dull**

This was one of the best lines I've read in poetry for awhile. strenuously poetic. Seriously dope piece. I would just suggest a re-title, but yeh its not my strong suit either.

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Best,

Horror\_Albatross\_464

Thought bubble dull is a great image and I almost want an illustrative cartoon with this poem. Maybe overuse of alliteration, but I do this all the time too and it brings levity to the theme.

I can fully relate in my own way to this. Nice work!


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I used to dream and dream 

And let my thought bubble beam–

Bursting at the seams with all kinds of dreams

But time’s way and how it speeds

Was truly a trouble unforeseen

By a young me putting back dreams

Until it dried and left my thought bubble dull 

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/vwu057/comment/ifsvqtk/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/vzfpo4/findings_in_sorrow/

Dreams