Persuasive Words
Persuasive words spoken so convincingly
Leaving no doubt the path laid out
Correctly leads them to Divinity
Sensual sensations running through the flesh
Creating pleasures, changing no’s to yes
Inching closer to the most desired request
Whispering suggestions beating ear drums
Fragile mind soaking words like sponge
Believing this will make them one
His experience, he will to please
His advances, her fight cease
He advances on her flesh with ease
Sweaty palms as hearts began to race
Lips to lips locking in embrace
Blood flow moving to new place
His goes south, hers go north
His mind and soul she desires to explore
To him it’s just Sex and nothing more
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Posted Jul 17, 2022, 12:49 AM UTC · edited
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