This is a very primal poem and it feels raw. I love the imagery used here and I would love to see more of this.   


10/10.

Ah I know, I had it formatted and then uploading ruined it 😂 idk how to line by line format on reddit

Edit: sorted it, thanks so much!

Formatting could be a lot better. Line-by-line would make it much easier to read the poem and understand it quicker. I like the description of the 'prey' of these monstrous men. Great work!


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Ohh I see. Yeah this is about sexual assault and rape so not really meant to be that haha

A genre of gay porn/erotica called omegaverse, usually centered around werewolves. Theres alphas, what is very similar to who is described in this poem, and omega, who are very submissive. Then there's betas, who are even more sub. 

Usually, its fine, but its also often paired with mpreg or vore.

Oh no hahah what even is that? Please 😂

Oh no, this reminds of the Alpha-Omega gay trope. Please, soneone get it out of my head.

very raw, i liked the primal energy you gave this

Is there anything to the bed of weeds? Or is that just referring to the ground? Also, it's a very powerful piece. Thank you for sharing.

Hungry eyes &amp; greedy paws of generations of Men

Big guts and matted beards ready to maul with their bare hands

whatever their gaze sets upon to satisfy their gluttonous lust


Their prey; frozen, willing itself to disappear in to the bed of weeds

Hearts thumping against the thin skin of their chest

Let the feast begin

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Predator & Prey