[2416] Crimson Queen CH 2 v1

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The goal is still to keep the intrigue going while developing more of the 'hard facts'. I'm trying to foreshadow some interesting conflict while hinting towards the larger narrative. Let me know if I've done that while still capturing your attention.


IN CHAPTER 1, we learned that Alessandra is a consciousness trapped inside Sasha. Zu, Sasha's old friend, tried to poison her because he believes that Alessandra has taken over her. He died as a result, but his doubt is reflected in all of Sasha's old allies. Which will betray her next?

Crimson Queen CH 2


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Posted Jul 24, 2022, 5:53 PM UTC

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