[2713] The Crow of Broekhorst - Chapter 1 (Again)
With the help of this great community, who have pointed out the flaws of my past work, I’ve been able to identify most of the problems with the chapter. I tried changing it without rewriting the whole chapter, but a great amount of changes were made.
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My critiques (added one more)
[2986] Forged for Violence: A Small Girl
Posted Jul 19, 2022, 3:01 PM UTC
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