Thanks for sharing your thoughts, that’s an interesting interpretation!

I certainly agree, you've got to know what you're doing when writing Haikus, this person does!

You know, this poem felt refreshing, like when one washes their face.I loved the phrase "Arctic Breath" it's not something that one would expect in a description of the cool temperature and what I interpret as the dawn mist before the temperature rises during the rest of the day but I did like it. The last line "Another mirage" is well placed as well. It gives that air of mystery that one would associate with the early morning mist and dew. Well done!


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The Earths arctic breath

Startling the morning dew

Another mirage

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Haiku - Summer Dream