Life in a Shell

The world can be a hell

If you live inside your shell.

I have been more alone 

Then the sad sapling grown

In the sandy desert.

You know how much it hurt?

I was willing to die,

And I would ask God "Why?"

No one deserves that fate,

Which is why I don't hate

Anyone for their ways.

Like the sun, I send rays

Of light across the Earth,

Hoping to grow some mirth

In the pained hearts of all,

So that the accursed walls

That judgment did install

Eventually fall.

Critique One

Critique Two