[2448] The Insurgent's Tale - REVISION

Hi folks,

I've been taking your advice and revamping this Tale accordingly.

[Here is The Insurgent's Tale - Version 2](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-mDCfBhSlJtrw6iTaxZRaKcCvAe54zTtZZSJ9Pc1PvA/edit)

I read the comments on V1, cleaned up the typos, paired down some of the more arcane worldbuilding, coalesced the time-hops, rearticulated some of the scenes, etc. this one probably ain’t perfect, but I think it’s a much better reading experience. YOU be the judge!

Comments to the old version (found here.)[https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/v53yby/2399_insurgents_tale_scifi/]

Last time, there were some questions about context and wider setting. This work is a standalone piece as part of an anthology. (Basically a Canterbury Tales set in the World of Crestfall.)[https://substack.com/profile/4182278-crestfall-roastmaster].

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Crit:

3386 - (Cosmic.io)[https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/vrde6p/comment/igcsq3j/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3'