[1,816] Silence and Coffee in the End

This is my second attempt at a short story. It's about the last man on Earth making himself a nice cup of coffee like he does every morning.

I'm a young amateur, so I'll be happy with any sort of feedback at all. Especially a scathing critique. Thanks!

Story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/184i5uvUupEGQgy4OdMUa3jutTWIjuwHQl2xwYWXY-oc/edit?usp=sharing

Critique: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/wk3gsd/comment/ijlog90/?context=3