[1226] The Family Heritage - Chapter 1

This is the first chapter of a new book I'm writing. I'm planning to have each chapter only be a single scene with there being 50-60 chapters in total. For that reason, the chapter length is going to hover around 1000-1500 words. Not looking for any specific feedback, just read it and let me know your thoughts.

Link:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ec4-vQhPBUI6Ac3dWOcejEi6an1hghAg62446SAXlIA/edit

Crit [2170]:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/wk3gsd/comment/ijmvlex/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3