clear and vivid imagery. well executed lines. i thought this was a very concise as it also shares a very heartfelt message. overall i really enjoyed this poem.

Very good imagery throughout. Keep up the good work.

Your imagery is beautiful! Really good feel good poem!!

I loved the imagery as well as the rhyming, it's sweet poem. Enjoyable read, good work.

amazing imagery. felt like and heartfelt, almost like a hazy memory, just like summer

Enjoyed it.

Darting in a blur - is it the butterflies or the whole scenary? or something else?

So I interpret that the speaker explains the wonderful scenary,  and then compare it no visible/blurry to the person accompanied. Cliched comment: Nice imagery.


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Buzzing bees, on flower tops –

Lazing beneath great yews -

Clear blue skies, blossoming sundrops -

spending time with you -

Lilies sat on sun stroked ponds -

Dragonflies flit in the haze -

Even strengthening our love forged bonds -

On those blissful summer days -

Butterflies skirt the meadows green -

Darting in a blur -

Yet, you alone in my eyes are seen -

My hearts true conqueror –

\[1\] [https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/wmnwfq/you/ik09qux/?context=3](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/wmnwfq/you/ik09qux/?context=3)

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Summer days