[3,167] In Love with your Death, Part 1

In Love with your Death is a story about a young man who inadvertently manifests a succubus into his reality through his dreams. This story is my first real attempt at writing, and I am collaborating with Dreamily.ai

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1y9CJEOzvpB5gceiYBWWcR9LTo4F-2z4fk2xwYO1fMpA/edit?usp=drivesdk

There are currently 11 total chapters to this story, and I will keep writing them until I feel satisfied that the story has come to a finish.

For me, Dreamily.ai is like training wheels. Helping me get comfortable with writing, and finding my narrative voice. In the beginning, Dreamily.ai does most of the work, while I cherry pick and try to make edits for consistency, and be a gentle guiding hand. As the story continues, I am getting much more comfortable, and asserting more direct narrative control. By chapter 10 I have begun writing a large majority of the story myself.

All of my inputs and edits have been highlighted in bold text, which I hope does not distract too much from the reading experience.

For critiquing purposes, please feel free to treat this story like I wrote it all myself, as the Ai won't be able to read the critiques or make any changes, obviously 😅

I hope you enjoy the read!

Oh also, if you missed the tag, this story gets VERY NSFW. For my future follow up posts, from the end of Chapter 4, to Chapter 9 it gets pretty dark.

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My Critique(s)

(5,238) https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/woaruo/5238_the_spout/ikglet5?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3

(777) https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/wmfmzu/777_oceans_last_breath_chapter_1/ikhb5os?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3

(2852) https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/wohe44/2852_gaia/ikm616o?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3

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