Thank you so much for the praise! I was wondering how this would turn out and i think it came out perfect.

I've been wanting to write something about this, but I think you did it very well. Like you wash away the bad thoughts with the warm water hitting you; but you know that you'll be there again the following day.

Excellent, I loved this poem <3

I feel like all the pain I feel is slowly going down the drain yet clinging on at the same time. Good job!


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The formatting is a bit of an odd choice (maybe it’s cuz of mobile) but the content is pretty cute if not an interesting exploration of the mundane

Very relatable content, kind of like Bukowski. It’s a great image and I’d suggest fleshing it out a little. Drawing out more symbolisms. Very good work!

Step in bare skinned, exposed. Turn on the water and let it wash over you with cold thoughts. Use soap to wash off your dirtiness, hair wash to wash out your head. Watch it spiral down the drain, all of the bad in you. See as it crawls back up to you.   



https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/wzziye/wolves_in_sheeps_clothing/?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=ios_app&amp;utm_name=iossmf
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/x11uht/over_through/?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=ios_app&amp;utm_name=iossmf

Shower thoughts