Thanks so much for reading and responding so thoughtfully 🥰

I am feeling this so strongly at the moment, it feels like hell and heaven at the same time. My favorite line is “ageless and wise but somehow still foolish.” The ambiguity and uncertainty of maturity and knowing what you want is so relatable and the way you worded that was beautiful. I really enjoyed this! ❤️


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I wish we had been bold enough to kiss//
Making out mixed signals through the static//
Super charged with feelings of fleeting bliss//
So close to affection I could panic//


Treat me special and talk to me sweetly//
And I will transform, flowing like water//
Puddling into where you most need me//
Until I become your spot that’s softer //


Instead of a princess make me your king//
Ageless and wise but somehow still foolish //
Needing to indulge in the finer things //
But only about three quarters “that bitch”//


I always give as good as I demand//
Notice me as the star stuff I am//

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/x17ayy/shower_thoughts/?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=ios_app&amp;utm_name=iossmf

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/x18jz9/3_centimeters/?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=ios_app&amp;utm_name=iossmf

Praise me (like, u should) - sonnet