[2252] Crimson Queen CH 1

I was told the chapter was a bit confusing so I've been trying to clear up some of the exposition while keeping a good flow with the action. Let me know how I did. Did everything make sense? Would you keep reading?

Crimson Queen

Sidenote: title is fake. IDK what to call this yet.

EDIT: made some changes based on Cy-Fur's suggestions (thanks!). It's reflected in the doc.

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