Was having a painful day and I could relate to each word you said. You conveyed so much so effectively in so less words. Thank you for sharing this. Keep writing.

I can relate to this right now. Almost as if you are my parallel self. It brought me right to the feels and I feel as if I'm suffering with you.


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i feel your pain,there was a point of my life where i wanted someone so bad that i actually did fall off the edge of sanity.But it also opened a whole new perspective of learning to not tie my purpose of existence to a person.You are at least turning your pain into art.

I find myself here again…

At the edge of sanity and despair

A dream shattered like crystal to the floor

All my hopes, specks of dust blown away in the wind

What I want will never be

Is it for me, her, or another? Who knows

One day I’ll recover

But for now, all I feel

is Pain

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