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Thank you! yeah the formatting got messed up somehow, if you know how to fix/prevent it id love to know. im glad you enjoyed though despite the wonkiness!

This is gorgeous! The wording is beautiful, it's very vivid.

This may have just been a formatting error, reddit can be a pain! That being said, the only thing I'd correct is your punctuation, and spacing. When it's compressed and lacking commas and periods, it's harder to read clearly.

Yeah that makes sense, but man is it dumb that you have to do that. but i will definitely put that advice to use because my spacing getting messed up is DEFINITELY annoying considering i spaced it how i did for a reason😭 but thank you, i appreciate the help

So what I usually do is put multiple spaces between the line when I want it to be just one space. If I want two spaces between the line I really put a lot of spaces lol. So basically for every one space you want you should hit return like 3 or 4 times. Does that make sense? I’m not sure if that’s how everybody else does it or if there is a better way but it seems to work most of the time.

Yeah you and Hexxkitten666 are right, reddit makes spacing a pain😭 theres supposed to be 3 separate stanzas, but thank you! im glad the wonky spacing didn't interfere too much with the vibe. do you happen to know how to fix this spacing issue though? its done it a few times now and spacing is pretty important

Took me a second to get the clear picture. But as the other person said it may be a formation issue? That’s happened to me many times. Such a hassle sometimes. 

That being said I thought it very well written. I love the idea of the narrator taking delight at night and then waiting out the day so the beauty of the moonlight will return. My favorite line is “ A true delight, with a single sight can paint one’s spirit a shade lighter.” Great work.

Mist veiled moonlight seeps through
A web of tangled trees and branches
Shining its soothsaying silver light
Just right enough to blanket the black grounded night

A true delight, with a single sight can paint one’s spirit a shade lighter
Until day breaks the trance, and at first glance the sweeping sun prances into every corner
Bringing with it new broken and bending branches to block in vain the sunset

Patiently awaiting the new moon with glee
So again all worldly worries may flee
Even if only for the time being


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Mistveiled Moonlight