[2332] Chronic Skies
This is about half of the opening chapter to a novel I'm currently working on. It's a sequel to my first book Psychedelic Turnpikes , the only important details for context are:
The two main characters, Tarron and Darian, are on their way from Cheyenne, WY to Reykjavik, IS. But first they're taking a road trip down I-25. Darian has breast cancer and Tarron recently had his ear shot off (well not completely shot off, more like just a little of the top) then proceeded to nearly overdose on a mix of mescaline and morphine while in police custody (it wasn't his fault, he swears).
Just looking for general feedback. Go nuts. At your discretion. My goal is to hone in on best writing practices before I publish this one.
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[1248] The Melancholy Fragments, Prologue
Posted Sep 22, 2022, 8:44 AM UTC · edited