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Wonderful use of word choice that's not overdone. Enough to paint a beautiful scene but not too wordy as to be difficult to read. I felt as though I could visualize the whole scene. Well done!

Very cute poem. Put a smile on my face and made me think of young love. I liked it. Good work.

Alone together with the sounds of nature

Young boy and girl full of love with hearts so pure

The rustle of the evergreens, violent rapids of the stream

Her gaze struck him like a moonlight beam

Wind blows through both their hairs as her gentle smile illuminates the night

Sitting high up on a cliff with an unimaginable sight

Birds sing their melodies as the pair finds comfort in each other

They can think of no better way to spend the summer


https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/xnsswc/as_small_as_i_feel/ipv3r87?utm_medium=android_app&amp;utm_source=share&amp;context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/xns5c5/shattered_glass/ipv4qp6?utm_medium=android_app&amp;utm_source=share&amp;context=3

Love & Nature