holy cow thank you i will stay hydrated and keep writing and being myself just for you

Oof. Some things can be short and hit you like a rocket blasting into an asteroid. I see you OP - and I feel you. This is eerie and makes you feel the fear of absence. To not exist. It’s quite a sad poem and that’s okay. I want you to know that I absolutely love the line “what’s realer than my creation” - if I had all the money in the world I’d get that tattooed. Bravo. Please - if you do ever feel down and out - my DMS are open. Stay hydrated. Keep writing. & continue being you.


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If, at the end of the day, you're a figment of my imagination

I will leave the world behind, along with my medication

I don't care anyway for the endless rotation

you say nothings real, what's realer then my creation.

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just need to know you're ok

you only push me away

push me out into realization.

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please push me away