I started having these dreams recently and it feels strange scarry but it is so powerfull...

This is beautiful. I love how it shows, to me, how we push ourselves to greatness (even if it feels like it’s forced).

Thank you, I think it means that sometime giving up control is necessary to achieve some catartic freedom. Im not a big "control" guy in life so I guess this kind of dream applies to that persona. Someone who seeks control won't relate and the whole experience becomes more a nightmare than a dream...

>I can't fly but I can jump real high. It feels almost dangerous, lethal even. The more I jump, the furthest I get.

We have all had this dream and it always feels so real. I always wonder though, what does that dream mean? 

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I love this piece. 10/10.

I think this is an interesting topic to write about. It makes me think about taking risks in life and being afraid of what the outcome will be but also loving the adrenaline as well as the possibility of success.


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I can't fly but I can jump real high.
It feels almost dangerous, lethal even.
The more I jump, the furthest I get. 

I have no control on my legs.
The unknown of my demise scares me.
Am I going to die crashing or will I never get down? 

This brand new euphoria to escape.
Or to reach beyond the common great.
Never have I been so happy and afraid.


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A common dream of mine