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Oh man the build up of looking towards the good in your life just to end it with “I understood you will never be back” is so great. It’s as if you’re listening to a steady rhythm to have it interrupted with the sound of breaking glass. Absolutely beautiful

I really like this poem. I am a little confused if the "you" in the last line is about a specific person, and the other "you"s are a generality or about yourself?

I love how you ended it. It really hit me. It’s like you built this warm feeling and then turned it col really fast. Leaves me with a lot of questions.

This kinda pulls at the heartstrings. The silver lining “through the clouds” is a subtle susceptibility to a “soul” that has been cleansed as “the cold breeze bathe you face” provides a semblance at a perceptibly that we often overlook. The morning brings with it joyfulness and vibrancy as you busy yourself in the airiness of day paralleled with the foundation of “soil between your feet” that “replenishes you” with a reassurance that you are walking in “life”.  But then the susceptibility of “morning” is cut short as the realization of “you will never be back” is accessed. I love how you started with light, gave us a little darkness, and then ended this with a duality of the two! Great stuff!

this morning i understood that as tormented as the past can look. 

the sun may shine through the clouds if you look in the right direction.

let the cold breeze bathe your face and clean your soul. 

the soil between your feet will replenish you. 

until you’re once again.

ready to be you. 

this morning i understood that you will never be back.


Dear Suicide -
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/y7pm8d/dear_suicide/isyf2ar/?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=ios_app&amp;utm_name=iossmf&amp;context=3

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/y7qbrm/4/isyfu3j/?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=ios_app&amp;utm_name=iossmf&amp;context=3