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I very much enjoyed the imagery, with the stained glass and the line about "Faith". I also particularly liked how "Faith" was capitalized and I wonder if there would be other places to capitalize a powerful word to push the intentional capitalization. 
Either way, I liked this poem!

Shattered stained-glass shards  
silently scrape against my skin.  
I struggle to suppress  
my sacrilegious satisfaction.  

The fading fragments fall  
from a Faith they’d soon forget.  
This flurry flirts with profanation  
and is full of fear and freedom.   

And as I basked beneath  
a broken Baroque blockade.  
My brain buckled beneath the burden  
of the brick that I had thrown.  

And my blood stained the glass once more.



https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/y9cnl2/comment/it5ba9v/?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=web2x&amp;context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/y9f88y/comment/it5af65/?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=web2x&amp;context=3

Twice-Stained Glass