You have a mouse. ?  That would wake me up for sure!  Love it.  Simple and everyone can relate.  Love the wording.


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The noise of you


My quiet melody 


At 3am


In the kitchen pantry 


Pulls my heartstrings 


Out of slumber's symphony 


Into fearful symmetry 





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Into Fearful Symmetry