jane doe

I wanna be a Jane Doe

Just another lost soul

Everyone's forgotten me.

Just leave me be,

6 feet deep.

A worn piece of Earth, No one will visit. No one will care, No one will listen.

Here's the critique since it's SO important in lieu of writers being FREE: https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/xrzlh2/veins_and_arteries/iqid8oa?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/xo6r45/the_housecat/ipzhff3?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3