[1,404] David's Burden

Greetings RDR,

Let's get right to it.

Synopsis: A twelve year old boy is living with junkies somewhere in the middle east. He's finally had enough, and decides to rob tourists at a busy market to try and escape his situation.

This is the first half of the short story.

All feedback is welcome!

Story: [1,404] David's Burden

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