"Sunk your teeth into me" 

This line is my favourite part of the piece. The metaphor describes the situation very very well and I really enjoyed reading the piece. Thank you for sharing it


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I gave you pleasure

You twist me with your tongue

Sunk your teeth into me

Till I became undone

You swallow me whole

Or spit me out when you were done

When I was your gum.


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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/yyajvv/these_are_old_bones/?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=ios_app&amp;utm_name=iossmf

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/yy9hc3/the_duality_of_my_mind/?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=ios_app&amp;utm_name=iossmf