Child of Divorce

Their love was a castle by the sea

Built from sand, hand carved carefully

With shells and glass shard decor

That sparkled in the summer sun

The princess was I

They played by my side

In the castle I adored

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Take a closer look and you will see

Their castle was made ruefully

And built too close to harbored shores

Storm clouds brewed when the day was done

In the blink of an eye

In came the high tide

And the castle was no more

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Any suggestions on how I can make this poem better would be greatly appreciated.

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