[2091] Day of that ‘Dare’

Hi! This is my first submission here. This a short, lighthearted romantic story. I hope it leaves you with a sweet feeling.

My Novel

Some points I’d know:-

1. Did my work succeed in making your heart flutter? If not, then which part had the most potential to, but I just ruined it?
2. Which parts/lines were just way too cliché for you to read?
3. Any problematic grammar or sentence structure
4. Is the epilogue okay or would it have been better without the epilogue?
5. Any suggestions for a better title?

I am open any kind of critiques. So please go all out. Can’t wait to know what you think of my piece.

My critique [2132]