Loves Last Sight[479]

My critique- https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/znqf89/944_a_good_man_with_a_borrowed_gun/j0nl697/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3

Story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Qh03pBoFxSmbCNePhLuY_R3RXxGWCGyL2-FSwK6eCds/edit

Questions-

1. Did the story flow well?

2. Is the dialogue fine?

3. Do the characters have unique voices

4)Any general feedback

5)This isn’t a feedback question but how can a beginner writer improve or what are some ways to basically train with writing? Sometimes when Im writing it just feels like something is missing or there is something I haven’t learned which is why it can feel like shit sometimes but Im not sure what i need to work on or how to improve