[2167] Day of that Dare

Hi!

This a short, lighthearted romance novel. Hope you’ll enjoy it.

My Novel

Please go all out with your critiques. Any kinds of opinions accepted. Thank you for taking your time to read my work! I really appreciate it.

P. S. I would appreciate it if your critique is more focused on my writing style, prose, flow, etc., instead of only the storyline. Also, this is a revised version of a story that I’ve posted previously. Please let me know if it’s not allowed.

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