[2055] Ballet of the Whippoorwill

EDIT: Thank you everyone for your critiques! I have enough to begin revisions now.

Thank you in advance for your critique. This is a self-contained short story. I will read every response, even if I don't respond to all of them. Comments are enabled on the Gdoc. All comments are welcome, especially those regarding the following:

• Did you find the story "hook" compelling?
• What is your opinion about the characters?
• What is your opinion about the ending?
• What is your opinion about the title?
• Were you confused anywhere? Did you have to reread anything for it to "make sense?"

https://docs.google.com/document/d/183fo1diJKjkFZbC0NUgNb4quRKmqVs3DZGrROyvi7NU/edit?usp=sharing

Critique: [2264]