[1134] Sickness 1

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eWIxkM4DuHzg8eUl8ItoaHZDIvxJMCm90H9B_l__YUc/edit?usp=drivesdk

The first chapter of my historical fantasy novella.Do go easy on the grammar,I am working on it and it's not my first language. There is a major time skip after this chapter and it serves only to set the scene and introduce the main character.I ask that you take that into consideration as you critique it.

I would like to know your : 1)does it seems immersive and realistic? 2)thoughts on the characters 3)thoughts on the prose 4) do you look forward to the next part?

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/zk9llz/1377_the_serpent_in_the_woods/j24dczh?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3- my critique

Edit : adding another critique https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/znqf89/944_a_good_man_with_a_borrowed_gun/j24scl6?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3