[2290] A spark

Hi this is the first time I'm submitting my work. I'm a novice writer and I've been writing short stories in the YA genre. I'm submitting one such short story here, I'm curious to find out if you find the story intriguing and would want to read more.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Lq3bY0krTEHGERdL8tJo1jn2ECsQkBsQj56pE_JE1bs/edit?usp=sharing

Links to the critiques I've given,
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/zyf0p1/comment/j2c5jnt/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/zy8zdm/comment/j27n0mc/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3