ItsCoolDood

Hey all!

I've been writing a first draft of a fantasy novel for a while now. It's been loose ideas, but it feels as though it's finally coming together - I'm around 15 chapters in now. I just wanted to put forward one of my more complete chapters for critique. I want to know where the style and prose work, and where they don't, so my future writing can shine brightly!

This will be the first time I've shared this with anyone other than friends and family. I'm a little nervous, but I feel I need to take the leap.

This would be the third chapter in the novel. The POV within has already been established in the other two, but this is the first time he has any dialogue.

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Not sure if this is an intended design choice or a bug, or if any of you have noticed, but whenever you destroy an item to make space for another, it doesn't just destroy that item, but instead destroys every single copy of that item your inventory, regardless of rarity.

This also one time happened to an item I had equipped. I destroyed a common pair of trousers to make way for a weapon, then around 25 minutes later, I realised I was pantless...

I was looking at the new Cho'gall skins, and noticed it.