Rob_OSullivan

I'm 20 years old, I've been writing for about 7 years now and I've yet to put a penny into competitions, blacklist, etc. I've so far just been putting my head down and trying to write as much as possible, really learn what I'm doing. I entered a free entry competition from the blog 'scriptshadow' (I know it's not one of the most liked blogs around here, but it was free and I wanted to try) last year and I ended up coming in the top ten.

I've come to the point where I'm feeling more confident in my writing, to the point where I think some could genuinely attract interest. In fact, one of them did. Briefly, by a producer I met through my college professor - but it didn't take. However, I've w

I'll start - I bought Nemanja Matic with Wolfsburg. 6.3 avg after 18 games before he was dropped and forgotten about.

Earlier I was watching some videos at a fairly middling level (around 50%) and suddenly my speakers stopped working and have been replaced by a clicking sound instead. I've tried mostly everything I've found on youtube for the issue; I've tried installing driver updates, I've uninstalled and reinstalled the driver, I've disabled audio enhancements and exclusive control - I don't know what else I can do. Headphones and earphones still work with the laptop, but the speakers just won't make anything but the clicking noise

Sorry if the title is a bit funky. What I'm referring to is just that little tiny bit you almost have to rewind back to (if listening digitally) because of how much you like it.

Mine, for example, is in H61's Desolation Row - the six seconds of 4:57 to 5:03 are like my crack cocaine, from his delivery of the lines to the distinctive fingerpicking guitar - I swear it just sends serotonin coursing through my whole body.

I saw a few posts looking for this since fmscout took it down, and I'm just after recovering the original torrent file I downloaded back in November on my old hard drive. Anyone who wants the best facepack in the game, feel free to download! (Just make sure you have uTorrent or some equivalent) The zip file is around 6GB, so prepare to have patience with the download

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Wasn't sure the best way to upload, hopefully google drive does the trick - https://drive.google.com/file/d/1P6D2ySQAAoirA2rsoyDD7Tez2QxqV0Y8/view

A group of down on their luck writers in the 1600s plot to kill William Shakespeare at the premiere of Macbeth after he continuously steals their ideas.

I know it needs more expansion and a fork in the road for the heroes, but as a basic premise how does it sound?

So I'm writing an action script at the minute, and I know all the beats I want to hit and I've outlined thoroughly for 2 and a half months. The only thing really challenging me at this stage, is the opening scene - I want it to be filled with adrenaline and energy as well as suspense and tension, while also revealing a lot about the characters and who they are.

It got me thinking that the opening action set piece to an action script is, in my opinion, the most important part of the script. Action films are built on, well... action, and first and foremost, the opening action set piece indicates to a reader how good the writer is. Opening scenes for any script are rough, cos you gotta communi

Would love any and all feedback!

Pilot Logline:

A push-over businessman's loyalty to his billionaire father is put to the test as he learns of his conglomerate's links to a dangerous drug cartel.

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1djQ7-mEPW6BL4vTHQf7fv-LVgvpeu96r

Whoo! I did it. Wrote the pilot that had been in my mind for months this month for ZeroDraftThirty! Would love any and all feedback from you guys.

Pilot Logline:

A push-over businessman's loyalty to his billionaire father is put to the test as he learns of his conglomerate's links to a dangerous drug cartel.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1u65uSfyLpzmVQWyqzqPWBAv4OiWdgIwu/view

Would love to read this if it's available. I bought it on iTunes but didn't get any script with it

Logline: A reclusive former detective returns to his rebuilding hometown, following a flu pandemic that crushed society, to solve the first murder in three years with the help of a younger, wannabe policewoman.

Any and all feedback is appreciated. Does the logline intrigue you? Are the characters well developed and do they feel like real people? Is the pacing good? If you got bored by the script - when exactly did this happen? Are the subplots interesting? Does the story build or does it drag?

If you can answer just even one of these questions, I will be immensely thankful.

Link - https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B_wNCZaQ_NEhZk9wSEtqY2V1Yjg

Anyone have it lying around? Please and thank you.