witchdoctorpixie

I'm looking for someone to beta my second chapter of my fic Winter in the Dreadfort

Fandom is Game of Thrones. It is Ramsay Bolton x O.C, rated M for smut / violence. Genre is hurt / comfort, adventure and romance.

The first chapter was proofread by a friend I made from the fandom, but I don't want to ask them for anymore beta help because it was more of a one-off favour to help get me started (this is my first fanfic) as they are extremely busy. It was also read over by someone I found on the Beta Request section of FF, but they went awol and haven't responded to any of my messages.

Everyone I have messaged off the Beta

I couldn't find any discussion around the fact that Josh carries around Rebecca's love note from Summer Camp. He has a girlfriend of 15 years yet he carries around another woman's teenage love note with him everywhere he goes?

It seems like a double-standard that Josh got so weirded out by Rebecca declaring that she did move there for him and was ready to start their love story, yet he's clearly a bit of a clinger himself. He seems to thrive on her obsessing over him and constantly encourages her.

It's hurting my self esteem not feeling assured enough to refuse to disclose intimate details about a matter I don't feel comfortable sharing. I'm going to regain my confidence and start being firm with people who pry to a point that is rude.

When anyone asks me insensitive questions regarding it, instead of passively answering I'm going to reply: "that is a private matter." Or "I don't want to discuss it." No attempts at vague answers to satisfy curiosity or idle gossip- a firm but polite 'no.' It's them being rude, not me and I shouldn't feel cornered or obligated to discuss my private life.

I'm taking my 2 boys away for Christmas with me, I'll be gone for aprox. 1 week, maybe less. Their usual cage size is 120cm x 55 x 40 and it's too bulky to take with me in my mums small car so I bought a spare cage but I'm a little worried it's a bit small. They'll be getting lots of out of cage time as their going to be housed at my older brother's and his partners children own rats so their comfortable with them free-ranging.

The dimensions are 59cm high x 40 wide x 30 deep. Rat cage calculators say it's not big enough for 2 rats, but it's only very short term so I'm not sure what would be suitable?

http://i.imgur.com/T3W8B.jpg

(Sitting next to it is the cage I take them to the vet i