[2675] THE SUICIDE NOTE OF A TEENAGE GIRL - YA Contemporary TW SUICIDE

TW SUICIDE

This is my current work in progress. I am looking for feedback on my first chapter. To give a little context the formatting is of a journal or diary. The MC decided to take her own life and is writing her story before she kills her self. Then she meets a boy who changes her perspective on life. I would love to hear all feedback you can give be but I am really working in voice, so I would love some special feedback on that. The link below is the doc, you can comment on there as well if you please. I also linked where I gave feed back to others stories. I apologize for the formatting, I am new to reddit. Thank you all so much!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xe_zJsZMIpVQEg8RCdy7KOrjEnjd83i6F26aZg0gtDI/edit?usp=sharing

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by u/ImaginaryDimension92 from discussion [2558] Port Umbra — YA Fantasy (Short Story)
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