[2054] Age of Exploration - Chapter 1

The story is a historical fantasy set on a carabean island set during the age of musket and sail. It's about discovery, conflict, a quest for freedom and survival.

I'm looking for general thoughts, grammar, spelling, punctuation, sentence structure, issues like that. Specific faults and errors would go a long way to helping me improve. Do not hold back and let me know what you think, and I hope you enjoy the story. Story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VMr1sMyaQO7I124dDLtJZ8pns4s2zfzN/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=101451621934447667560&rtpof=true&sd=true

My critiques: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/12w9wdo/2750_red_one/ [2750] Red One https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/12v5fj1/2110_shanties_and_song_prologue/ [2110] Shanties and Song - Prologue https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/12ui3be/2119_marconi_2nd_draft/ [2119] Marconi (2nd Draft)