[1135] Blame it on Procedure Ch 1

Hello! This is the first part of chapter 1. It's a space opera/comedy (though is it really funny?). Still playing with the title a bit.

My Story

Looking for clarity issues, descriptions, grammatical, and the like. This was originally a short story before readers thought it could grow into a fun adventure involving the human and the MC. Anyway, let me know if there are things I can expand on.

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