[1349] Break Point Version 3

Hi Y'all,

Back again with a new rewrite. For this rewrite I went back to the drawing board and focused on implementing all the feedback I've gotten so far.

Based on the feedback I received previously, it was clear that I did not do a good job of communicating what the treatment was/how it worked, I did not provide enough character details, including the basics like name and age, and I did not explain the narrator's conditions and struggles. This time, I tried reading this from the perspective of somebody who doesn't have OCD and anxiety and depression. I believe it's much clearer now. Hopefully that makes for a more enjoyable reading experience!

I appreciate any feedback y'all have. The good, the bad, the ugly.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rrqZ4CxVPpCfxpCQ5hliOcnhh5xNQ4yRyZjqLkymQGg/edit?usp=drivesdk

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[2296] Apricots

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[1616] Rumor Has It

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[1416] The Taxidermist

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