[Link](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YApCzucxtugRjAoZ_ddIuN3qF2No2ePD2hNu_3E6RI8/edit?usp=sharing)

Start of a fictional short story. It's in rather early stages, so all thoughts are welcome.

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