[860] Soulbound opening Version 2

Hi all!

You guys have given me some fantastic feedback on version 1 of this piece. I've done a load of editing, and this is version 2!

I'm really keen to hear whether it's compelling, whether the demon attacks feel realistic, and whether Freya's reasoning for wanting to go out despite the attack works for you.

I'm trying to set up how close Cara and Freya are, as most of the book follows Freya trying to get revenge after Cara is killed.

Here it is!

Version 1 if you're interested

Some critiques: https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/14p7gl2/1520_in_breaking_the_oath/jqhpla3/

https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/14mbjcc/2128_underworld_mechanization_chapter_1_welcome/jq6jzfo/