Hi, I posted this before and have since made some revisions that changed the direction of this story. I have a sneaking suspicion there's one issue with the piece that'll be brought up, but I'll keep quiet until someone mentions it. So, please let me know what you think.

Tag line: Set in a retro-futuristic underground compound, an ambitious experiment raises ethical concerns that impact both the scientists and subjects.

Do the character's feel multidimensional? Are their individual motivations clear? Do you see a general plot forming? How's the prose? Any symbolism you notice? 

[Link to story](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YmBXzgwcv9DIJ026ltIRiBeAEkXNIC40UeJm7RhfJYw/edit?usp=sharing)

Re-upload (I'm not trying to spam you guys). I've added two more crits given this is a 3K+ story, hopefully it suffices. 

[\[2477\] Lacrimosa](https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/16png82/2477_lacrimosa/k21qum3/?context=3)

[\[2117\] Ligaya Lopez and the Bonliso Bean](https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/16p4bge/comment/k2nt6st/?context=3)

[\[1807\] Chapter One of YA Sci-fi Novel](https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/16h7407/1807_chapter_one_of_ya_scifi_novel/k2s0ttb/?context=3)

[\[974\] The Little Bird Nesters](https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/16r8c14/974_the_little_bird_nesters/k226vn8/?context=3)

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[3245] The Reality Conservation Effort (Version 2)