[1963] Wretched, Chapter 1

Hi everyone!

Wretched is a sci-fi novel about a Frankenstein's-monster creature who has to obey all commands she's given. The political powers of the city use her as a hound for their nefarious agendas, trading her skills between them, all the while depriving her of freedom and autonomy.

Here is the first chapter: Link

I'm primarily looking on feedback on the style and voice of the piece, and how well it functions as the beginning of the story. Would you read further? But any and all comments welcome!

Thank you all for your feedback.

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