[2389] Valistry, Chapter 1
Ragnarok is a god, our Earth was mutated into the Nine Realms, and handheld devices cast runic magic. VALISTRY is a Science Fantasy story. We follow an up-and-coming protector of peace who struggles to balance duty and personal desire when a villain has answers to the mystery that broke up her family.
Chapter 1 has been put through a ringer over the last year. By now, I just want to know if it works. Is the prose understandable? Is the meaning of everything clear and not bogged down by unnecessary or improper detail? As always, I welcome other criticism too.
Posted Feb 13, 2024, 2:17 AM UTC
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