[1250] Decision at the Misty Fall

Fantasy

Hello, I am new to the community and working on improving my writing. I have linked the first short story I felt was good enough to share. Please let me know where I can improve, or what comes off as unclear!

CW: References to cancer, suicide, loss of self

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Posted Feb 19, 2024, 6:31 AM UTC

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