[2083] Rhiain Dances

Hi all, this is a piece of a larger work, which I haven't fully expanded upon yet. It shouldn't require any additional context, but I will note that this is not the first chapter (so readers of the larger work would already be introduced to the POV character), but it is the first appearance of the character Rhiain.

Thanks in advance!

My story

My crits: 1, 2