[2903] Century of the Witch - Prologue/Ch.1

Hi all

Finished my first draft of this story a few months ago and just getting around to editing it. So far this is the only chapter I've actually edited, just want to get some outside feedback before I do the whole thing.

Note: main characters are under 18 and the story involves violence, swearing, mildly suggestive groping

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Three crits ~~~