[3167] After Credits (3rd Draft)

Hi there,

This is the third draft of a short story I posted here a little under a year ago. I took a hiatus from writing because of work. Instead of coming back to write something completely fresh, I thought I'd take something I wrote in the past and revisit it.

This is the result: After Credits (3rd Draft)

Thank you to anyone who takes the time to read through this. Whether soft or heavy handed, I appreciate any and all feedback.

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Critiques:

- [352] Such Holy Light - A micro piece about an original take on Noah's Arc

- [2903] Century of the Witch - A compelling story about an orphaned boy who wants to be a witch

- [1004] Anthill, Ch. 2 - An urban fantasy that follows the investigation of a sinister being